书城外语六级写作速成的秘密:3个月写出好成绩
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第27章 模板作文赏析(8)

The following is my introduction to the conference.First,it is my great honor to be here with all of you and declare open the Conference of International Trade Cooperation.Second,on behalf of our company,I would like to express my heartfelt welcome to all the guests and delegates.Last,I believe our cooperative efforts are sure to be productive.

I wish all of you could enjoy yourselves during this conference and hope the above information will help you.If you have any question for me,please feel free to ask at any time.Thank you for your attention.

妙语评析:这篇开幕词首先对大家表示了问候和欢迎,然后对自己做了简单的介绍,其次就开始具体详细地介绍所要召开的会议,在最后一段,提出自己的良好祝愿。

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1.Good morning,ladies and gentlemen,welcome to_______________

2.To begin with,_______________

3.The following is_______________First,_______________Second,_______________Last,_______________

4.I wish_______________

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Ladies and gentlemen,

Good morning,ladies and gentlemen,welcome to_______________To begin with,The following is_______________First,_______________Second,_______________Last,_______________I wish_______________If you have any question for me,_______________

Thank you for your attention.

You have a friend who is about to enter university,and he wants you to advise him on which subject to specialize in——history,in which he is very interested,or computer science,which offers better job prospects.Write a letter:

1.Explaining what he could do,

2.Why he could do this

3.Wishing him luck with his studies.

范文欣赏

Dear John,

You asked for advice concerning whether you should study history or computer science at university.I will try making some suggestions.

University is preparation for your career.You should consider studying a subject which will best equip you to earn a living.Computer science offers more job opportunities than history.We are now in a high-tech age.For the foreseeable future,it would be necessary for everyone to be equipped with computer skills merely to earn a living!

Of course,you don’t have to devote all your time at university to studying computers and nothing else.I would recommend that you continue reading of history in your spare time.That way,you will fnd that your leisure hours are enriched while you prepare yourself for a worthwhile career in computer science.

Whatever you decide to do,good luck with you study.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

妙语评析:先说明了写信的缘由,在第一段最后一句写出了自己要给出建议,然后就开始把自己的建议一一列举出来,并把这样做的结果进行阐述,最后提出自己的愿望。

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1.You asked for advice_______________

2.I will try making some suggestions.

3._______________offers more opportunities than history.

4.For the foreseeable future,_______________

5.Of course,_______________I would recommend that_______________

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Dear××,

You asked for advice_______________

I will try making some suggestions._______________offers more opportunities than history.

For the foreseeable future,_______________

Of course,_______________I would recommend that_______________That way,you will fnd that_______________

Yours sincerely,

xxx

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a letter.You should write at least 150words and you should base your composition on the outline below:

1.对他的到来表示欢迎

2.提出对度假安排的建议

3.提醒应注意的事项

范文欣赏

June 23,2001

Dear Xiao Wang,

I am delighted to know that you will be able to visit me for a week during the National Day holiday.I am looking forward to your visit and to the opportunity to catch up.Welcome to my home in Nanjing!

As you know,Nanjing has many places of interest to see,to discover,and to enjoy.Among its historical sites are stone city wall,the Confucius Temple with its magnificent night view,and Dr.Sun Yetsen‘s Mausoleum.With all its universities,Nanjing is a cultural center,offering an abundance of artistic and musical performances.It’s also a city of beautiful gardens and parks,such as the Xuanwu Lake Park.With all these features,we will have a fun-flled week,especially that in early October,there are many sunny and mild days for outdoor activities.So,I would suggest visiting these places frst,and deciding on the others as our exploration.

Finally,since at this time of the year the weather gets a little chilly in the evening,I would suggest that you bring some warm clothing with you.Also,as there will be crowds of people at the stations and on the trains,you need to be very careful with your belongings!

Best wishes for a pleasant journey!

Yours,

Zhang Ying

妙语评析:这封信在开头现对朋友的来访表示欢迎,然后把自己的假期安排做了概述,同时详细地介绍了自己的家乡——南京的地方特色,说明南京是个值得游玩的胜地,最后提出自己的一些建议。

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1.I am delighted to know that_______________

2.I am looking forward to_______________

3.As you know,_______________

4.It‘s also_______________such as_______________

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Dear xxx,

I am delighted to know that_______________I am looking forward to_______________

As you know,_______________It’s also_______________such as_______________So,I would suggest_______________

Finally,since_______________I would suggest that_______________

Yours,

xxx

Directions:The summer vacation is drawing near.You are Li Ming by name,who want to fnd a part-time job.Write an application letter of about 150words within 30minutes.

范文欣赏

Dear Sirs,

I‘m Li Ming,a sophomore majoring in English at XX University.I read in yesterday’s newspaper that you are looking for a part-time secretary and I think I‘ll prove to be a real fnd for you.