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The implied meaning of the chart above can be briefly stated as follows.On the one hand,university students are encountering more psychological problems than ever before.The fact can be attributed to many factors.Most university students are overloaded with study and haunted by employment pressure.As young and inexperienced people,they are also facing emotional dilemma and trial of human interrelationship.Besides,some students are in a fnancial predicament.On the otherhand,necessary psychological work for university student is a must for the time being.It is quite shocking that at least forty percent of university students suffer from spiritual depression.The very fact should not be neglected.Effective countermeasures must be taken to reverse the current grim situation.In sum,the psychological problems should be put on our agenda.

In my view,great efforts must be made so as to ensure the healthy growth of university students.To begin with,we must have a good understanding the necessity of psychological instruction and guidance among university students.What‘s more,government departments at different levels and related organizations should make joint efforts to create a more relaxing environment for university students.Only in this way can university students develop well both physically and psychologically.

妙语评析:文章第一段先讲了图表所反应问题的表面意思,第二段从两方便阐述其深刻内涵,最后一段从作者的个人角度出发,说明我们应该为大学生的健康发展做出努力。

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1.As is apparently betrayed in the bar chart above,________

2.The implied meaning of the chart above can be briefy stated as follows.________

3.On the one hand,________On the other hand,________

4.The very fact should not be neglected.________

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As is apparently betrayed in the bar chart above,________The implied meaning of the chart above can be briefy stated as follows.

________On the one hand,________On the other hand,________The very fact should not be neglected.________In sum,________

In my view,________To begin with,________What’s more,________Only in this way can________

Directions:Study the following chart carefully and write an essay entitled The Changes in College Students‘Ways of Spending Vacations.In this essay you should:

1.interpret college student’s ways of spending vacations in 1980and2004,

2.analyze possible reasons for the change,and

3.your comments about the change.

College student’s Ways of Spending Summer Vacation.

A.staying at home

B.traveling

C.doing social investigations

D.other ways

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The Changes in College Students‘Ways of Spending Vacations

As is clearly shown by the chart,from 2000to 2010the students who go traveling and do social practices during vacations increase greatly while those who stay at home decrease a lot.For instance,in 2000,only 9%of the students took advantage of their vacation time to do social practice,but its percentage has been more than tripled in 2010.Obviously,great changes have taken place in the way that college students spend their vacations.

Considering these changes,we can find there are possibly three main reasons.Firstly,with the fast development of economy,many people have become rich,which makes it possible for more students to go traveling.Most parents tend tosupport their children to travel fnancially.Secondly,the reason lies in the fact that the boom of tourism has made traveling attractive and,also,modern transportation has made it easier for students to go out to travel.The travel agencies not only provide historic sightseeing but also cultural as well as educational tour around China.What is more important,the fast changing society has raised higher requirements for college graduates.The authorities of Chinese university or college have been encouraging their students to do social practices in the hope that college students would broaden their view to know more about the society and become more adaptable to the future work after they graduate.Therefore,more students go out traveling or doing social practices during the vacations.

As a college student,I think the charts refect the exciting progress on the college students’thinking patterns.We have become much mature to realize how to spend our vacations meaningfully and practically.Form the changes in the charts,it is easy for us to predict that more and more college students will walk out their home and throw themselves into more various vacation activities.

妙语评析:第一段先将图表所表现出来的总体变化做了个概述,然后在第二段从三个方面阐述引起这种变化的原因,第三段从自身角度表达对此的看法。

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2.For instance,________Obviously,________

3.Considering these changes,we can fnd there are possibly three main reasons.Firstly,________Secondly,________What is more important,________

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For instance,________Obviously,________Considering these changes,we can fnd there are possibly three main reasons.Firstly,________Secondly,________What is more important,________

As a________I think________it is easy for us to________

Directions:Study the following chart carefully and write an essay entitled Means of Travel to Work in Scotland in 2010.You should write at least 150words.

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Means of Travel to Work in Scotland in 2010

As me can see from the chat,it can be concluded that Scottish people were most likely to drive a car to work rather than other means of transport in 2010.Among all the people going to work,car drivers account for 62%while the passengers of bus make up 19%,walkers 16%and train travelers only 3%.

It is no wonder that so many people choose car-driving to go to work.They could take full advantage of its speed and convenience.Less people choose buses or walking,mainly because the former could only offer limited routes and the latter was time-consuming.