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A host of people expecially teachers think it is necessary to hold spoken English test.They regard if someone want to master English well,he had to say English fluently.Firstly,through such a test,which can motivate students plunge into Iearning spoken English.Secondly,China is a competing society.Pehaps you will beat your rival obtaining your job which you are satisfied with by saying fluent English.Lastly,China is experiencing reform and opening up.Many foreigners come into China.If you want to communicate with them,you had to grasp spoken English well.All these points are indispensable to holding spoken English test.

Some people,however,take a different attitude.Spoken English test is regarded as being unnecessary.For one thing,they think China has not a good Ianguage circumstance to practice spoken English.For another,in daily Iife,most of us have a touch with Chinese.It is unnecessary for us to communicate with each other in using English.

As far as I am concerned,I am in favor of holding spoken English test,which will benifit students forever.If you can say English fluently,you will pround of yourself.So I decide to study spoken English hard and grasp every opportunities to practice my spoken English.

(2000.6CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇提问类议论文。文章内容完整,中心明确,文字流畅。文中用黑体标出的句子点明了各段落的主题,引导着文章的中心思想。

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1.They regard if someone_________.

2.All these points_________.

3.Some people,however,take a different attitude.

4.As far as I am concerned,_________.

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A host of people_________think it is necessary to_________.They regard if someone_________.Firstly,_________.Secondly,_________.Pehaps you will_________.Lastly,_________.All these points_________.

Some people,however,take a different attitude._________is regarded as being unnecessary.For one thing,_________.For another,_________.It is unnecessary for_________.

As far as I am concerned,_________.If you can_________,you will_________.So I decide to_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic:Reading Selectively or Extensively?You should write at Ieast 100words,and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.有人认为读书要有选择。

2.有人认为应当博览群书。

3.我的看法。

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Reading Selectively Or Extensively?

Reading selectively or extensively?What is your choice?Perhaps each of us has our choice.

Some people think we should read selectively,for there are so many books for us to read.Thousands of new books are published every day.How can we cover all these books in our Iimited time?Besides,not all the books are worth reading.

Some people,on the contrary,choose to read extensively.They think that reading extensively can broaden their horizons.Through reading extensively they can Iearn something about their ancestors;through reading extensively they can get insight of great men.Reading extensively can also enable us to adapt to the fast developing society.Because we are Iiving in a knowledge exploding society,if we don‘t read extensively,we can’t get enough information about the modern world,and we can‘t keep pace with the society.

In my opinion,we should read both selectively and extensively.By reading extensively,we can enrich our knowledge of aspects.By reading selectively,we can focus on and Iearn well the academic knowledge we’ll need in our future work.Only in this way can we make good use of books.

(1999.6CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇个人观点议论文。开篇用疑问句引出了主题,说明每个人都有自己的选择。第二、三段分别阐述两类人的不同观点。最后一段将两种办法相结合,既要有选择的读书,又要博览群书,并讲明原因。以only引导的倒装句阐明这样做的必要性,又为文章增加了闪光点。文中用黑体标出的句子是此文章的精彩句式,为文章增加了亮点。

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1.Perhaps each of us has our choice.

2.Some people think we should_________.

3.Some people,on the contrary,_________.

4.In my opinion,we should_________.

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_________or_________?Perhaps each of us has our choice.

Some people think we should_________.Besides,_________.

Some people,on the contrary,_________.They think that_________.Through_________they can Iearn_________;through_________they can_________.

In my opinion,we should_________.By reading_________,we can_________.By reading_________,we can_________.Only in this way can we_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic Don‘t Be Afraid to Say“No”.You should write at Ieast 100words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们会说“不”。

2.为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”。

3.该说“不”时,不说“不”的坏处。

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Don’t Be Afraid to Say“No”

Sometimes we have to say“No”to others when they ask us for help.Why?One situation may be that we are not capable of doing the things they ask us to do.The other situation may be that we are unwilling to do what they ask us to do,because their requests may be unreasonable or even illegal.On both occasions we should say directly to them:“No”.

But the case is not always the same in our daily life.Some people are afraid to say“No”when they should say so.On the one hand,they are afraid of Iosing their faces.On the other hand they don‘t want to hurt others,such as their family members,relatives,friends or colleagues.

To say“Yes”when you should say“No”will eventually do you some harm.If you say“Yes”but fail to help them in the end because of Iack of the ability,they may think you are not worthy of trust.If you help them do something bad or illegal,you will be punished for what you have done.So,don’t be afraid to say“No”if necessary.

(1999.1CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇利弊议论文。第一段直接提出了一个观点即别人请求帮助时,我们会说“不”,并说明了理由。条理很清晰。第二段又提出了一个反面的观点即有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”,也例举了原因。最后一段列举了该说“不”时,不说“不”的坏处,并且最后下了结论,在该说“不”的时候不要不说“不”。文中用黑体标出的句子是每一段落的主题句,也是文中的骨干句。

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1.One situation may be that_________.

2.The other situation may be that_________.

3.On both occasions we should_________.

4.But the case is not always the same in our daily Iife.