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AIthough more and more students are crazy about going abroad to pursue their higher education,as far as I am concerned,I will prefer studying home to studying abroad.For one thing,you don‘t have to take foreign Ianguage tests such as TOEFL and GRE,which can save you a tremendous amount of time,money and effort.In addition,if you study home,you can stay with your family and old friends.For another thing,while studying home,you can enjoy the kind of intimate friendship and comfortable family atmosphere which you can only dream of in a foreign university,where you will be accompanied by your own shadow most of the time.For these reasons,pursuing one’s higher education at home is a more realistic and sensible choice.

In a word,no matter where do you choose to study,you should remember one thing,that is study is hard process,besides,when you decided to do something,you should try your best and gain a good result.

妙语评析:这是一篇个人观点议论文。首先引出了出国学习这一热潮。文章内容完整,主题明确。文中用黑体标出的段落写得很精彩,为此文章做了点睛之笔。

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1.What difference does it make between_________?

2.AIthough more and more_________,as far as I am concerned,I will prefer_________.

3.For these reasons,_________.

4.In a word,_________.

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Nowadays,with the development of science and technology,more and more people want to_________.What difference does it make between_________?

AIthough more and more_________,as far as I am concerned,I will prefer_________.For one thing,_________.In addition,_________.For another thing,_________.For these reasons,_________.

In a word,_________.

Direction:for this part,you are allowed 30miutes to write a composition about the“The Purified Water”.You write at Ieast 120words and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.纯净水成了人们生活中不可缺少的一部分。

2.纯净水的好处和坏处。

3.我们该如何正确的对待纯净水。

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The Purified Water

Nowadays purified water is becoming more and more popular in cities,no matter at home,at school,in the office and etc,because it is so convenience that we can drink at any time.

But purified water still has some disadvantages that are not what we think it is.It doesn’t contain the elements while human bodies need,it is also can not keep us from illness.Besides,purified water is not pure as we think.It was reported that most purified water was far from the qualification of drinking water.Therefore,we should not think that purified water is absolutely pure and it is good for our health.

In my opinion,everyone should put the right attitude to the purified water because it is not better than our daily drinking water and I also don’t think that it is good for our health.In a word,we should think qualified drinking water instead of so-called purified water.

妙语评析:这是一篇利弊议论文。根据所给的提纲,首先指出现在纯净水成了人们生活中不可缺少的一部分,还有纯净水的好处。第二段阐述了纯净水的缺点,列举了几个原因,条理清楚。第三段指出自己的观点,提出建设性的总结。结尾这段文字连贯性比较好,能给人留下深刻的印象。文中用黑体标出的句子是议论文经典的模板句式,适于背诵。

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1.It was reported that_________.

2.Therefore,we should_________.

3.In my opinion,everyone should put the right attitude to_________,because_________.

4.In a word,_________.

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Nowadays_________is becoming more and more popular in cities,no matter_________,because it is_________.

But_________still_________that are not what we think it is.Besides,_________.It was reported that_________.Therefore,we should_________.

In my opinion,everyone should put the right attitude to_________,because_________.In a word,_________.

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Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Welcome to our club.You should write at Ieast 120words following the outline given bellow:

1.本社团的主要活动内容。

2.参加本社团的好处。

3.如何加入本社团。

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Welcome to Our Club

Ladies and Gentlemen,

Now,thank you for coming.The Speech Club is organizing school-wide speech training.It holds contests on each Saturday at the Students‘Recreational Center.Five prestigious experts and professors will be invited to be speech Iecturers and contest judges.For each speech contest,the first six winners will be given awards.

Attending our club has substantial advantages.First,it can improve your ability to deliver a speech which is of utmost significance to your future career and development.Secondly,it can help you to possess self-confidence,enrich your extra curricula activities and make your campus Iife dimensional,colorful and vigorous.To sum up,the experiences in our club will be extraordinarily unforgettable throughout your Iife.

Students who are interested in our club,may sign up with the application forms before Tuesday next week(June 26).Everybody is welcome to attend our club.Thank you very much!

Sincerely Yours,

Liang Ruoqi

(2007.6CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇欢迎辞。除去称呼和签名共分了三个段落,首先是对听众的到来表示欢迎,并表示自己的美好祝愿和心情。欢迎辞的语言优美,用词准确,很多地方值得借鉴。文中用黑体标出的句子是应用文中常见句型,适于背诵。

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1.Now,I want to express my most warmly welcome_________,and we have been Iooking forward to seeing you for a Iong time.

2.It is a special day today!

3.First of all,I would Iike to introduce my club to you,_________.

4.I believe that_________.

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Ladies and Gentlemen,

Now,I want to express my most warmly welcome_________,and we have been Iooking forward to seeing you for a Iong time.It is a special day today!

First of all,I would Iike to introduce my club to you,_________.I believe that_________.If you_________,please_________.If you_________,please_________.If you_________,please_________.

I hope that you will Iove this sport with us.Thank you very much!

Sincerely Yours,

Signature

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a poster recruiting volunteers.You should write at Ieast 120words following the outline given bellow:

1.校学生会将组织一次暑假志愿者活动,现招募志愿者。

2.本次志愿者活动的目的、活动安排等。

3.报名条件及联系方式。