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Firstly,Lily has a strong ability to organize people and is ready to help others.At the same time,she showed great interest in teaching.What is more,she studied second Ianguage acquisition conscientiously and often talked with me after class about the questions that she had come across in her readings.As we talked,I found that she was very skilled in Ianguage teaching and Iearning strategies.AIso,she has worked part-time as a tutor for two years,which has offered her enough experience to be qualified teacher in your school.Worthy of mention is her personality,honest,reliable,responsible and mature.

I strongly recommend this promising young lady,and I am sure,with here experience,determination,and enthusiasm,she will excel in the position of teacher in your school.

If you have any questions with regard to Lily,please contact at 5592188.

Sincerely,

Mary Johnson

College Teacher

妙语评析:这是一封求学推荐信。首先叙述了Lily是一位勤奋有前途的年轻人,在学生时代很出色。文章中心明确,内容完整。文中用黑体标出的句子是此文章中的优美句型,为文章增加了闪光点。

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It is with great pleasure that_________.I have known_________.During the time I have found_________.

Firstly,_________.At the same time,_________.What is more,_________.AIso,_________.Worthy of mention is_________.

I strongly recommend this promising young Iady,and I am sure,with_________,she will excel in the position of teacher in your school.

If you have any questions with regard to_________,please contact at_________.

Sincerely,

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Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a Ietter to one of your best friends to invite her to take part in your birthday party.In the Ietter,you should:

1.告知生日宴会的时间和地点。

2.介绍宴会中的活动内容。

3.阐述被邀请人参加宴会的必要性。

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An Invitation Letter

December 15,2006

Dear Jack,

This December 25is my birthday and my parents will hold a birthday party for me on Saturday evening in my house.It would be pleasant having you here.Will you join us?

During the party time,we will have lots of activities you will be interested in.First,we can have a good chitchat about anything under the sun.Second,we can also sing the beautiful popular songs we Iike and cut the birthday cake.

I believe that you will be very interested in this occasion.First,you are one of my best friends and my parents want to meet you too.Second,we haven‘t seen each other for a Iong time and I am eager to see you.The party would not be complete without you!

The birthday party will begin at 7:30p.m..Is it possible for us to meet at seven o’clock,Saturday evening in my house?We do hope you can come.

Sincerely yours,

Tan Liang

妙语评析:这是一封宴会邀请信。文章的语言比较简洁但表意很到位,而且结构紧凑,条理清晰,连贯性很强。文中用黑体标出的句子是邀请信中常用到的句式。

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1.It would be pleasant having you here.

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_________.It would be pleasant having you here.Will you join us?

During the_________time,we will have Iots of activities you will be interested in.First,_________.Second,_________.

I believe that you will be very interested in_________.First,_________.Second,_________.The_________would not be complete without you!

The_________will begin at_________.Is it possible for us to meet at seven o‘clock,Saturday evening in my house?We do hope you can come.

Sincerely yours,

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Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview?You should write at Ieast 120words,and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:

1.面试在求职过程中的作用。

2.取得面试成功的因素:仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是……

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How to Succeed in a Job Interview?

Nowadays,in an ever tighter job market,great importance has been attached to an interview by both the employer and the applicant.The interview,so to speak,has become indispensable for getting a satisfactory job.On the one hand,the interviewer can take advantage of the occasion to Iearn about the candidates,such as their work experiences,education and their personalities,so as to pick out the right person for the company.On the other hand,the interviewee can make use of the opportunity to get to know the job he is going to take up,the salary,the working conditions and many other things about the job he is interested in.

Therefore,the job interview is very important to a job-hunter.But how can one succeed in it?Firstly of all,the interviewee must pay attention to his or her appearance.The first impression is always where we start.Get dressed properly and neatly.Secondly,good manners are equally important.Don’t be too proud,and neither too timid.Just be courteous.Thirdly,the interviewee must demonstrate his aptitude and skills for the job and his knowledge about job-related areas.Be confident.Last but not the least,the interviewee ought to be honest about his or her personal as well as academic background,for honesty is the best policy.

To sum up,the job interview is indeed important,but there is no need to be nervous.As Iong as the interviewee has the ability for the job,with careful preparation and a fairly confident and honest performance,his or her success can be ensured.

(2001.1CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇关于社会热点的说明文。不错的模板作文。文中用黑体标出的句子是文章的骨干句,而且层次分明,结构紧凑。

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Therefore,_________.But how can one succeed in it?Firstly of all,_________.Secondly,_________.Thirdly,_________.Last but not the Ieast,_________.

To sum up,_________.