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My mottos of Life

I got my inspiring mottos when I was just a junior student,accidentally from newspaper.I had been endowed with everything I wanted before that time including my beloved parents who treat me as their treasure.My out-going character which made me get along with different people easily and the fact that I was most proud of was that I could always achieve what I desired through diligence.I thought that it was my future,bright and promising until I entered my junior middle school,the so-called elite class.God probably wants me to know that life is no easy.There I found myself lost because no matter how hard I tried,I could never squeeze myself into the top 10.I felt helpless,a strange feeling I had never tasted,and then depressed.Since I couldn’t change the fact,why should I strive?Thus,I became lazy and my studybecame worse,until I found this sentence:“Don‘t be proud when you fulfll your goal and don’t lose your will when are in adversity.”That was just the advice I needed.

The motto is suitable for not only genius but also ordinary people as you and me.Maybe we cannot do things as well as the genius but at least,everyday,we are striding forward,making progress and challenging ourselves.

Hold on.There‘ll be tomorrow.In time,you’ll fnd the way.

妙语评析:“得志时莫得意,失意时莫失志”。年少时轻狂,学习上的暂时挫折,在遇到这句话时作者幡然醒悟。本文以作者的亲身经历作为佐证,向读者展示了这句话的深刻含义,具有很强的说服力。

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1.I got my inspiring mottos when________

2.I thought that________

3.There I found myself lost because________

4.The motto is suitable for not only________but also________

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I got my inspiring mottos when________

I thought that________There I found myself lost because________God probably wants me to know that life is no easy work.________

The motto is suitable for not only________but also________Maybe we cannot________as well as________

Practice Makes Perfect

1.怎样理解“熟能生巧”?

2.例如:在英语学习中……

3.又如……

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Practice makes perfect.This self-evident proverb means doing something repeatedly is the only way to become skilled.That is to say,practice makes a difference between an inferior performance and a perfect one.

Learning a foreign language like English is a case in point.You can take in a lot of information about it,such as its pronunciation,vocabulary,sentence structures,grammatical rules,idioms,and usages,but all these tend to quickly escape from your memory.Therefore,you must practise listening,reading,speaking and writing so as to remember them and become fuent in the language.

The truth represented by“practice makes perfect”can also be found in other areas.A skillful tailor is one who has certainly made a large variety of clothes,while a competent surgeon is one who has performed a great number of operations.Engage yourself in performing tasks instead of just learning about them,and you will learn to become a perfect doer.

妙语评析:这是一篇对于谚语的哲理进行论述的文章。第一段,怎样理解“熟能生巧”,要对谚语的含义进行阐释,即利用类似定义法的写作方法给“熟能生巧”下定义。第二段,要以英语学习为例来证明“熟能生巧”,第三段,通过提及不同职业的例子来进一步阐述“熟能生巧”。

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1.This proverb means________

2.________is a case in point

3.You can take in a lot of information about it,such as________

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This proverb means________.________is a case in point.You can take in a lot of information about it,such as________Therefore,________

The truth represented by________can also be found in other areas.Engage yourself in performing tasks instead of________

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic A Man Is Known by the Company He Keeps.You should write at least 150words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.“观其友,知其人”的意思是……

2.怎样将此谚语付诸实践?

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A Man Is Known by the Company He Keeps

Have you ever thought of the famous proverb“A man is known by the company he keeps”?To me,it is meaningful and signifcant in three respects.

In the frst place,friends of the same kind often gather together-if they have the same aim,they will help each other in daily life.Just as the saying goes,“birds of a feather flock together”.In the second place,if two people have different attitudes toward life,they will break up some day even if they become friends at frst.Finally,friends are those people in life who have no natural physical bonds with us,so they are our free choice.

We can learn a lot from this proverb and put it into practice-we should be extremely careful in choosing friends.On the one hand,we should keep away from those friends with bad habits,vulgar taste or no ambition.On the other hand,we should try to make friends with upright and knowledgeable people,who will beneft us a lot in our future life.

妙语评析:开篇以问句引入谚语,直接点题,并引出第二段;第二段从三个方面来解释此谚语的含义;第三段总结指出,在选择朋友的时候要慎重,即远离有不良习惯的人,同时努力与积极向上的人交朋友。

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1.Have you ever thought of the famous proverb________?

2.To me,it is meaningful and signifcant in three respects.

3.On the one hand,we should________.

4.On the other hand,we should________.

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Have you ever thought of the famous proverb________?To me,it is meaningful and signifcant in three respects.

In the frst place,________.In the second place,_________.Finally,_________.

We can learn a lot from this proverb and put it into practice-we should_________.On the one hand,we should_______.On the other hand,we should_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Failure is the Mother of Success.You should write at least 150words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.失败是不可避免的

2.为什么说失败是成功之母

3.我的观点

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Failure is the Mother of Success

In the long life span,we will definitely experience a wealth of setbacks.It‘s more than a possibility.It’s an inevitability.A great variety of highly uncertain failures and diffculties will be on our life path.