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Thank you for Iistening.I hope you enjoy yourselves today!

Directions:In this section you are required to write a Ietter in reply to a friend‘s inquiry about applying for admission to your college or university.You should write at Ieast 120words and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:

1.建议报考的专业及理由;

2.报考该专业的基本条件;

3.应当如何备考。

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A letter in Reply to a Friend

December17th,2003

Dear Thomas,

I am delighted to Iearn that which major you should choose,I propose that you apply for the major of English.To begin with,English is the most popular Ianguage in the world,which is widely used in all fields such as teaching,translation and so on.What’s more,it goes without saying that English majors are more Iikely to find a good job in the tighter and tighter job market.

In order to study at English Department,you have to meet the following requirements.In the first place,you have to spend a Iot of time on it,just as the old saying goes,“Practice makes perfect”.In the second place,the basic skills of reading,writing,Iistening and speaking are necessary,because they are the foundations for your future study.Last but not the Ieast important,you need an intense interest in Iearning English since“interest is the best teacher.”

As far as I am concerned,first,you should of all review all the required vocabulary.In addition,you’d better spend some time on reading and writing.Only through these measures can you hope to enroll in that university.

(2004.1CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇书信应用文属于建议信。首先向朋友推荐了报考的专业即英语,又说明了两点理由,条理清楚。第二部分主要是从三方面说明报考英语专业需要具备的条件,引用的两个谚语很贴切。第三部分讲了如何备考,结尾是以Only引导的倒装句,增强了语气,更加突出了主题。文中用黑体标出的句子是引用的谚语,为文章增加了闪光点。

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1.To begin with,_________.

2.Last but not the Ieast important,you need_________.

3.As far as I am concerned,first,you should_________.

4.In addition,you‘d better_________.

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Date

Dear_________,

I am delighted to Iearn that which major you should choose,I propose that you apply for_________.To begin with,_________.What’s more,_________.

In order to study at_________,you have to meet the following requirements.In the first place,_________.In the second place,_________.Last but not the Ieast important,you need.

As far as I am concerned,first,you should_________.In addition,you’d better_________.Only through these measures can you hope to enroll in that university.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic:A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus.You should write at Ieast 120words,and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:

假设你是李明,请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信,内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等,可以是表扬,可以是批评建议,也可以兼而有之。

日期:January 12th,2002

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A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus

January 12th,2002

Dear Mr.President,

I‘m very lucky to attend this world-famous university,but I’m afraid I‘m not content with the canteen service on campus.

Firstly,the quality of the dishes should be improved.Undoubtedly,there are a Iot of delicious dishes,but all the year round,they are the same.More and more students are complaining about eating the same food each day.So I think the most urgent problem is variety.Secondly,the price is a bit too high.Many of us hope that the canteen can provide us with not only delicious but also cheaper food.Finally,the environment is so noisy that we can’t enjoy our meals in good mood.I suggest that there should has some soft music to help us relax.

These suggestions are not only of my own,but also of many other students.We hope our respectable president will pay attention to our suggestions.

By the way,the canteen workers are very patient and always smiling.So I think if our university offers them better conditions,they will offer us better service.

Best wishes,

Yours sincerely,

Liming

(2002.1CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一封建议信。第一段开门见山的提出对食堂的状况不是很满意。第二段从菜的种类、价钱、就餐环境三个方面说了令人担忧的食堂情况,并给以建议。第三段对校长表达了诚挚的敬意。第四段则表扬、肯定了食堂及学校的工作。这封书信内容完整,表意到位,结构紧凑,连贯性强,值得学习。文中用黑体标出的句子是这封建议信的主题句,也是常用句式。

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1.I‘m very Iucky to attend_________,but I’m afraid I‘m not content with_________.

2.These suggestions are not only_________,but also_________.

3.We hope_________will pay attention to our suggestions.

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Dear_________,

I’m very Iucky to attend_________,but I‘m afraid I’m not content with_________.

Firstly,_________.Secondly,_________.Finally,_________.I suggest that_________.

These suggestions are not only_________,but also_________.We hope_________will pay attention to our suggestions.

By the way,_________.So I think_________.

Best wishes,

Yours sincerely,

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Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a Ietter.Suppose you are Zhang Ying.Write a Ietter to Xiao Wang,a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the week-Iong holiday.You should write a t Ieast 100words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese.

1.表示欢迎。

2.提出对度假安排的建议。

3.提醒应注意的事项。

题目:A Ietter to a Schoolmate

日期:June 23,2001

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A letter to a Schoolmate

June 23,2001

Dear Xiao Wang,

I‘m delighted to learn that you are going to visit me during the week-long vacation.My parents will also be happy to see you again.I’m sure you will enjoy every minute here.

Firstly,I know you are fond of swimming.A river Iies not far away from my home.We can go swimming there.I think it would be very pleasant and refreshing to swim in such hot summer days.Secondly,in every big room of my home there is an air-conditioner.We can watch TV,play CDs or read books very comfortably at home.In addition,a mountain about two miles away from here is beautiful and it is worth touring.We can go there on foot.When we climb to the top of the mountain,we can have a wonderful bird-eye view of the whole village.

Just phone me before you set off.There is no need for you to take anything.I‘ll prepare everything for you.