书城外语四级写作速成的秘密:3个月写出好成绩
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I am looking forward to seeing you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Zhang Ying

(2001.6CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一封私人信件。首先非常简洁地指出同学要来的消息,对此表示欢迎。第二段是写具体的安排,分为游泳、在家看电视读书与爬山等方面。第三段提醒出发时给“我”打电话,还有“我”会准备好一切所需要的东西。最后是结尾的寒暄语。这封信件紧扣提纲,表意到位,语言流畅。文中用黑体标出的句子是信件常用的开头和结尾的写作模板。

句型模板

1.I’m sure you will enjoy every minute here.

2.Firstly,I know you are fond of_________.

3.In addition,_________.

4.Just phone me before you set off.

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Date

Dear_________,

I‘m delighted to Iearn that_________.I’m sure you will enjoy every minute here.

Firstly,I know you are fond of_________.I think_________.Secondly,_________.We can_________.In addition,_________.We can_________.

Just phone me before you set off.There is no need for you to take anything.I‘ll prepare everything for you.

I am Iooking forward to seeing you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Signature

Direction:for this part,you are allowed 30miutes to write A Letter Applying for Bank Loan.You write at Ieast 120words and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.简单介绍自己的情况。

2.申请贷款的原因,金额和用途。

3.我的还款打算和保证。

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A Letter Applying for Bank Loan

25th,July,2007

Dear Sir,

I am a junior in Hebei University,majoring in English.In the previous one and a half years I have been a model student and monitor of my class.

However,since I registered here,the expenses have become a burden for my average family.You know,my parents are both Iaid-off workers,and,to make matters worse,my father has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation.It will be beyond their ability to finance me through my reminding education.Therefore,I must relieve their financial pressure and that is my responsibility,now I am applying to your bank or a loan of 100,000yuan.If my application is approved,all the money will go to my tuition and fees for the coming academic years.In addition,I have made a detailed plan to arrange my school life,I guarantee that I will repay the loan within five years,please believe me.

I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted.Thanks.

Yours sincerely,

Li Jianming

妙语评析:这是一封申请信。根据提纲的要求,文章中心明确,内容完整,语言优美,用词准确,能给人留下深刻的印象。文中用黑体标出的句子是应用文(申请信)常用句型,适于背诵。

句型模板

1.Therefore,I must_________.

2.In addition,_________,I guarantee that_________.

3.I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted.

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Date

Dear_________,

I am_________.In the previous one and a half years I have been_________.

However,since I registered here,the expenses have become a burden for my average family.You know,_________.Therefore,I must_________.In addition,_________,I guarantee that_________.

I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted.Thanks.

Yours sincerely,

Signature

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a Notification.You should write at Ieast 120words and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:

1.系学生会搞义卖活动(benefit fair)以资助贫困孩子上学。

2.希望大家踊跃把自己多余的学习用品(school supplies)和二手书(second hand books)捐献出来。

3.活动的程序。

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Notification

The Students’Union of our Dept is scheduled to hold a benefit fair on Saturday to raise money for children in the poverty-stricken Northwestern part of China.The efforts to be made are to support these children to continue their school education for the coming 5years.

The procedure goes Iike this:from now on the student body is kindly asked to donate some of your items temporarily not used by you and that might be of some use to others,such as some school supplies and used textbooks.Donators are welcomed to our office with their donations from 4pm to 9pm Monday through Friday and 9am to 5pm during weekends.And we will have your donations taken care of,Iisted and categorized.

At 9‘oclock this Saturday,the benefit fair starts at the conference room of our Dept.Until then we are expecting you to come to our office with you donations.And you will get what you wish to have this Saturday morning.And remember all the money will go to the support of children.

妙语评析:这是一篇通知,属于告示类应用文。通知结构层次合理,语言表达明确。文中用黑体标出的句子烘托出了通知的意义,也是文章的点睛之笔。

句型模板

1.The efforts to be made are to support_________.

2.The procedure goes Iike this:_________.

3.Until then we are expecting you_________.

4.And remember_________will go to the support_________.

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_________is scheduled to hold_________on Saturday to_________.The efforts to be made are to support_________.

The procedure goes Iike this:_________._________are welcomed to our office with_________.And we will have your_________taken care of,Iisted and categorized.

At 9’oclock this Saturday,_________starts at the conference room of our Dept.Until then we are expecting you_________.And you will_________.And remember will go to the support_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a Ietter.Suppose you are Wang Lin.Write a Ietter to Zhang Bian Attorney-at-Iaw to apply for a position of Iegal secretary.You should write at Ieast 120words and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:

1.申请法律秘书职务。

2.说明自己的专业。

3.请求面谈。

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An Application Letter

January 19th,2007

Dear Mr.Zhang Bian,

I am applying for the position of legal secretary advertised in Today‘s Youth Daily.I major in economic Iaw.My training in Iegal technique,business Iaw,and Iegal secretary practices etc.definitely meet your qualifications.My complete resume is attached.

I will graduate on July 1st,2007from BeiJing University.In addition to the required courses of this program,I have studied English and Accounting as my second and third major.I also have some experiences in general office work,because I have had a part-time job in a company for two years.I believe my training and experience will enable me to perform better than other candidates who Iack working experience.You will find me to be reliable and efficient.