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第34章 模板作文赏析(18)

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When Iooking for_________,you will most Iikely_________.This seems to be in fashion now.Through_________,which provides a way_________.

On the one hand,_________,such as_________.

On the other hand,_________.And it will be better_________.

Through_________,people who_________will have a better chance of getting a good one and those who_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic My Most Favorite Programme.You should write no Iess than 100words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:_________

1.我最喜爱的电视(或无线电)节目是……

2.这类节目的内容和特点。

3.我喜欢它的原因。

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My Most Favorite Program

The News Report has always been my favorite TV program.AImost everyday I turn on the TV at 6:30p.m.and wait for the People and Society at TV10.This has become a part of my life.

The People and Society contains a Iarge amount of information from the domestic news of people‘s Iiving standard and most people who need to be concentrated such as orphan,incurable people.And the most important character is its truth.Because of this,People and Society can educated most people in the modern society.

In my opinion,the People and Society is more than a TV program.It is a way of communication.From this program,people can know and understand each other.The world thus becomes smaller and smaller.I especially appreciate this benefit of watching this program.

(1993.6CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇关于社会生活的说明文。按照提纲要求文章分为了三个部分。值得学习的说明文。文中用黑体标出的句子是比较精彩的短句,适于背诵。

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1.And the most important character is its truth.

2.Because of this,_________.

3.In my opinion,_________.

4.From this program,_________.

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_________has always been my favorite TV program.AImost everyday I turn on_________.This has become a part of my Iife.

_________contains a Iarge amount of information from the_________.And the most important character is its truth.Because of this,_________.

In my opinion,_________.It is a way of_________.From this program,_________.I especially appreciate this benefit of watching this program.

Direction:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Keep Fit.You should write no Iess than 120words,and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.健康的重要性;

2.怎么保持健康。

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How to Keep Fit

A healthy person can enjoy his life energetically and achieve what he hopes for in his career.On the other hand,if poor in health,a person cannot achieve much success though he is well-educated.Therefore,health is very important to one’s happy Iife.

What should we do to maintain and enhance our health?There are many ways which help to build up one‘s health.Firstly,we should keep a balanced diet.That is to say,we should not have too much intake of animal fat,but more vegetables and fruits.Secondly,if one wants to keep fit,he must give up the habits that damage his health.Finally,regular physical exercise is essential for a healthy mind and body.

In a word,if everyone can stick to what are mentioned,he can always keep fit and pursue his career effectively.

妙语评析:这是一篇关于社会生活的说明文。第一段点出了健康的重要性。第二段第一句话是一个过渡句,引出了下文保持健康的方法,条理清晰,层次分明。最后一段是总结全文,再一次点明健康的重要性。第二段以一个疑问句开头然后分层展开说明,这种方法使文章更富有说服力,也为文章增添了光彩。文中用黑体标出的句子是比较精彩的句式,为文章增加了亮点。

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1.On the other hand,_________.

2.Therefore,_________is very important to one’s happy Iife.

3.There are many ways_________.

4.In a word,_________,he can_________.

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_________.On the other hand,_________.Therefore,_________is very important to one‘s happy Iife.

What should we do to_________?There are many ways_________.Firstly,_________.Secondly,_________.Finally,_________.

In a word,_________,he can_________.

Direction:for this part,you are allowed 30miutes to write a composition about the“The Reform of Pension System”.You write at Ieast 120words and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.有必要实行养老金制度。

2.举例子说明。

3.实行养老金制度的意义。

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The Reform of Pension System

With the further development of the economy and technology,more and more people pay more attention to the pension,so it is necessary for us to implement a new pension system to satisfy our nation’s needs.

In the past years,when people retired they got pension from the factory or company they had worked for.There are a great number people of them are tended to do one job in their Iives no matter whether they are interested in the job or not.Now with the new pension system has been carried out,retirees get pensions from both their personal accounts and government pension account will be paid every month.

The significance of the pension reform gives me a lot.For one thing,it will guarantee retirees’lives and stabilize the society.For another thing,it also helps many companies and stated-enterprises.For instance,it is easy for the employer the company he likes and even the employee to choose the right person he wants.

妙语评析:这是一篇关于社会热点的说明文。首先点出了随着经济体制和工业技术的进一步发展,实行养老金制度的必要性。文章主题明确,结构紧凑,用词准确,连贯性较强。文中用黑体标出的段落结构层次很清晰,值得学习。

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1.With the further development of the reform of_________,it is necessary for us to_________.

2.For one thing,_________.

3.For another thing,it also_________.

4.For instance,_________.

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With the further development of the reform of_________,it is necessary for us to_________.

In the past,when_________.Now with the_________.

The significance of the_________.For one thing,_________.For another thing,it also_________.For instance,_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay on the topic Advertisements.You should write at Ieast 120words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.广告的作用。

2.广告的形式多样。

3.广告的夸张性。