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Advertisements

Advertisements are forcing their way into people‘s Iives.People refer to advertisements in their daily Iives because they are consumers.The advertisers are usually manufacturers,retailers and salesmen.Their merchandise needs to be advertised to bring it to the attention to the customers.Thus nearly every product is advertised in some way.To a large extent,good advertising leads to success while bad advertising can mean failure.

There are many ways to advertise and‘ads’come in different forms.First,newspapers carry advertisements.Second,some products are publicized on TV and radio which bring them into notice of a wide audience.Third,billboards also carry advertising.To sum up,advertising is a big industry now and many agencies have been set up to furnish a variety of forms..

However,advertising is not always truthful.On the one hand,a product is often misrepresented.The advertiser exaggerates the benefits of the merchandise he wants to sell.Thus,he misrepresents the truth.On the other hand,the consumer falls victim to such advertising.Millions of people have bought advertised products and have been dissatisfied with them.

妙语评析:这是一篇关于社会热点的说明文。文章运用的说明方法比较巧妙,条理也很清楚,语言也很生动。文中用黑体标出的句子是每个段落的主题句,与给出的提纲相呼应。

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1.There are many ways to_________.

2.To sum up,_________.

3.On the one hand,_________.

4.On the other hand,_________.

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Advertisements_________.The advertisers are usually_________.Their merchandise needs to be advertised_________.Thus_________.To a Iarge extent,_________.

There are many ways to_________.First,_________.Second,_________.Third,_________.To sum up,_________.

However,_________.On the one hand,_________.On the other hand,_________.

Direction:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic Choosing Career.You should write no Iess than 120words,and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.你所选择的职业将会影响你的生活道路;

2.要做出正确的选择,应对自己的能力、兴趣、目标和供选择的职业有足够的了解,并向有经验的人请教。

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Choosing Career

The career you choose will affect the future of your Iife,such as your range of friends,your choice of husband or wife,where you Iive,your recreational activities,and other important aspects.To make a good choice,you must have a clear knowledge of your abilities,interests and aims.

For one thing,you have to weigh carefully the immediate advantages against the long-term prospect offered by the job you are considering.For another thing,be sure to ask your parents,teachers,and career advisers for useful suggestions,you can know more advantages of your personal qualities and qualifications.

In a word,having a clear idea about the work that suits you best,you should make a real study of jobs available.Obtain written materials or other information as much as possible and examine them from every angle before you make the final decision.

妙语评析:这是一篇关于社会热点的说明文。文章语言优美,内容完整,结构清晰,能给人留下深刻的印象。文中用黑体标出的句子用的很好,是此文章的闪光点。

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1._________will affect the future of your Iife,such as_________.

2.To make a good choice,_________.

3.For one thing,_________.

4.For another thing,_________.

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_________will affect the future of your Iife,such as_________.To make a good choice,_________.

For one thing,_________.For another thing,_________.

In a word,_________.

Direction:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic The Internet E-mail.You should write no Iess than 120words,and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.电子邮件开辟了新的通讯渠道且日益普及。

2.电子邮件给我们带来便利。

3.电子邮件的发展前景。

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The Internet E-mail

E-mail,as an entirely new way of communication by means of computers,is becoming so popular in both developing and developed countries,that it‘s difficult to imagine modern life without it.

E-mail is fast,inexpensive and highly efficient.It has brought much convenience to our daily Iife.First,you can send and receive by E-mail a variety of information and documents such as Ietters,papers,video and audio files to anyone in over 170countries in a short time.Moreover,Ianguage barriers are not problems,because the Internet software is capable of translating your mail into whatever Ianguage you want.Besides,you can also store,deleted it,compile and search your E-mail or send it simultaneously to different places.Finally by defining your own passwords you can always keep your mail a secret.

With the fast expansion of the band-width and wider application of Internet,E-mail will be more and more useful and soon it will become an indispensable means of communication throughout the globe.

妙语评析:这是一篇关于社会热点的说明文。根据提纲首先点出了电子邮件开辟了新的通讯渠道且日益普及。值得学习的好文章。文中用黑体标出的长句很精彩,也是文章骨干句。

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1.E-mail,_________,is becoming so popular in_________.

2.First,you can_________.

3.Moreover,_________.

4.Besides,_________.

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E-mail,_________,is becoming so popular in_________.

E-mail is_________.It has brought_________.First,you can_________.Moreover,_________.Besides,_________.Finally_________you can_________.

With_________,E-mail will be more and more_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic:What does friendship mean?You should write at Ieast 120words and you shouldbase your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.友谊是人生永恒的主题。

2.友谊到底意味着什么。

3.友谊的重要性。

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What does friendship mean?

What does friendship mean?There is no definite answer.An eternal theme in literature,friendship is also indispensable in daily life.