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第38章 模板作文赏析(22)

妙语评析:这是一篇对此谚语表示赞同的文章。范文首先点出了在人生道路上会遇到很多的困难与失败,即失败是不可避免的。不错的模板作文。文中用黑体标出的句子写得很精彩,为文章增加了闪光点。

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1.Its more than a possibility.

2.On the one hand,_________.

3.On the other hand,_________.

4.Furthermore,_________.

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Topic

In the Iong Iife span,we will definitely experience a wealth of setbacks.Its more than a possibility.It’s an inevitability._________will be on our Iife path……

However,_________.On the one hand,_________.On the other hand,_________.

When the unanticipated frustration comes,we must_________.Furthermore,_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Variety Is the Spice of Life.You should write at Ieast 100words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.大多数时候“变化是生活的调味品”是正确的。

2.但也有例外的情况。

3.结论。

范文欣赏

Variety Is the Spice of Life

When we talk of the famous proverb“Variety is the spice of life”,we should not simply label it as right or wrong,but explore it in depth.

This proverb is especially true under several situations.First,all people enjoy colorful Iife and hate monotonous Iife-variety can make them more efficient and energetic.Second,new experiences always bring new ideas and feelings,which are vital for us to understand the essence of Iife.Third,if we ever want to improve ourselves,we should comstantly change for the better by making new attempts.

Nevertheless,there are also some exceptions.Many things,in my belief,should be kept unchanged no matter how time flies.We should hold on to our dream if we ever want to turn it into reality.And we should always be Ioyal to our parents,partner and friends.

In a word,we can draw the conclusion that in most cases“variety is the spice of life”,but in certain circumstances,staying unchanged is the right choice.

妙语评析:这是一篇对此谚语表示部分赞同的文章。文章主题句,也是文章的骨干句。

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1.When we talk of the famous proverb_________,we should not simply Iabel it as right or wrong,but explore it in depth.

2.This proverb is especially true under several situations.

3.Nevertheless,there are also some exceptions.

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Topic

When we talk of the famous proverb_________,we should not simply Iabel it as right or wrong,but explore it in depth.

This proverb is especially true under several situations.First,_________.Second,_________.Third,_________.

Nevertheless,there are also some exceptions._________.

In a word,we can draw the conclusion that in most cases_________,but in certain circumstances,_________the right choice.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Knowledge is power.You should write at Ieast 100words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.为什么说“知识就是力量”?

2.举例说明。

3.结论。

范文欣赏

Knowledge is power

As a popular saying goes,knowledge is power.With our country developing fast,the importance of knowledge is becoming more and more obvious to us all.

In the very first place,with knowledge,one can easily find jobs.It is often said that we are entering a new age of information,and knowledge plays a key role in this age.For example,if one wants to work in IT field,one needs to improve his knowledge constantly.What’s more,knowledgeable people can get quick promotion in their work.As is often the case,a person in charge of an organization is the one who has most knowledge.In addition,more knowledge is also needed to make our life rich and fulfilled.

Accordingly,we must try hard to acquire as much knowledge as we can.Luckily,a Iot of means may enable us to do so.Among other things,we proves the best and fastest way to get information.

妙语评析:这是一篇对此谚语表示赞同的文章。根据提纲要求分为了三个部分,第一部分提出“知识就是力量”这一谚语,并指出知识很重要。第二部分以“工作”为例阐述了知识的作用,以及知识能为我们带来富足的生活。第三部分进行了总结,再一次点出知识就是力量,与主题相呼应。文中用黑体标出的句子是谚语类作文中常用句型,是不错的模板句型。

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1.As a popular saying goes,_________.

2.With_________,the importance of_________is becoming more and more obvious to us all.

3.Accordingly,we must_________.

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Topic

As a popular saying goes,_________.With_________,the importance of_________is becoming more and more obvious to us all.

In the very first place,_________.For example,_________.What‘s more,_________.In addition,_________.

Accordingly,we must_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic No Pains,No Gains.You should write at Ieast 100words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.怎样理解“不劳无获”?

2.试举例说明。

范文欣赏

No Pains,No Gains

The well-known proverb“No pains,no gains”has Iong been accepted by all of us.It tells us that we have to make strenuous efforts whenever we want to be successful in a certain field.

Let’s take English study as an example.If we want to improve our Iistening ability,we have to keep on Iistening to different materials and make records from time to time.It is also true with spoken English.Listening to teachers attentively in class and reading books are far from enough-you should practice talking with partners every week.

Another good case in point is acrobatics.Nobody is born a good acrobat,and one can only become a skilled one after countless failures.All of us feel excited when they win grand prizes in international competitions,but who knows how many hardships they have endured?

Judging from the examples given above,we may safely come to the conclusion that no pains,no gains.So why not try our best to learn our specialty well?I am sure we will become experienced and skillful if we never give up.

妙语评析:这是一篇对此谚语表示赞同的文章。范文文章主题突出,内容完整,语言优美,用词准确,连贯性很强。文中用黑体标出的结尾句运用比较巧妙,起到了点睛的作用。

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1.The well-known proverb_________has Iong been accepted by all of us.

2.It tells us that_________.

3.Let‘s take_________as an example.

4.Another good case in point is_________.