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第37章 模板作文赏析(21)

On the one hand,football is connected with the people throughout the world.On the other hand,it has become a part of people‘s life,football matches are going on here and there around the world.Pick up a newspaper and you can Iearn the the results of the football matches.What’s more,we enjoy playing football,watching football games after work.During the football matches of the World Cup,millions of people watch the matches on TV.When their favorite teams win,they will give them three cheers.When they fail,they feel sad.We all hope our national team will be the strongest one in the world.

妙语评析:这是一篇关于社会热点的说明文。首先值得学习的优秀文章。文中用黑体标出的句子运用非常巧妙,为文章增加了亮点。

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1.More and more people_________.

2.In my opinion,_________.

3.But we still have a Iong way_________.

4.What‘s more,_________.

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Football is_________in the world.More and more people_________.

In my opinion,_________.But we still have a Iong way_________.We should_________._________must be invited.

On the one hand,_________.On the other hand,_________.What’s more,_________.

谚语类10例

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Practice Makes Perfect.You should write at Ieast 100words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.怎样理解“熟能生巧”?

2.例如:在英语学习中……

3.又如……

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Practice Makes Perfect

The famous saying“Practice makes perfect”is widely accepted today.It means if we practice unfamiliar things again and again,we‘ll be able to perform it perfectly.

The practice of learning English is a good example.We are not Iiving in an English speaking country.So,in order to Iearn it well,we need extra practice,such as reading English books,going to English corners,or communicating with foreigners.Only sitting at the desk cannot Iead to the mastery of English.

As another example,if we want to be skilled in using the computer,we also need to practice using it.Some children become Iittle experts in computer,just because they play with it everyday.On the contrary,if we just stick to books,we will still feel confused when using computers.

Judging from the evidence offered,we might safely draw the conclusion that practice makes perfect.

(1997.1CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇对此谚语表示赞同的文章。首先第一段引出谚语,并用一句话进行解释。第二段以英语学习为例阐述要想学得很好必须不断练习。第三段又例举了计算机学习。最后一段是总结并呼应了文章的题目。第二段的最后一句是以Only引导的倒装句,更能突出所要论证的主题。文中用黑体标出的句子是谚语类作文写作中常用句式。

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1.The famous saying“___________”is widely accepted today.

2.It means_________.

3.As another example,_________.

4.Judging from the evidence offered,we might safely draw the conclusion that_________.

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The famous saying“___________”is widely accepted today.It means-_________.

_________is a good example._________.

As another example,_________.

Judging from the evidence offered,we might safely draw the conclusion that_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a compositionon the topic A Man Is Known by the Company He Keeps.You should write at Ieast 100words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.“观其友,知其人”的意思是……

2.怎样将此谚语付诸实践?

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A Man Is Known by the Company He Keeps

Have you ever thought of the famous proverb“A man is known by the company he keeps”?To me,it is meaningful and significant in three respects.

In the first place,friends of the same kind often gather together-if they have the same aim,they will help each other in daily Iife.Just as the saying goes,“birds of a feather flock together”.In the second place,if two people have different attitudes toward Iife,they will break up some day even if they become friends at first.Finally,friends are those people in Iife who have no natural physical bonds with us,so they are our free choice.

We can Iearn a Iot from this proverb and put it into practice-we should be extremely careful in choosing friends.On the one hand,we should keep away from those friends with bad habits,vulgar taste or no ambition.On the other hand,we should try to make friends with upright and knowledgeable people,who will benefit us a Iot in our future Iife.

妙语评析:这是一篇混合型谚语类文章,既有观点阐述又有问题的解决。开篇以问句引入谚语,直接点题,并引出文章中心明确,内容完整,语言优美。文中用黑体标出的句子是谚语类写作中比较经典的开头段,适于背诵。

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1.Have you ever thought of the famous proverb_________?

2.To me,it is meaningful and significant in three respects.

3.On the one hand,we should_________.

4.On the other hand,we should_________.

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Have you ever thought of the famous proverb_________?To me,it is meaningful and significant in three respects.

In the first place,_________.In the second place,_________.Finally,_________.

We can Iearn a Iot from this proverb and put it into practice-we should_________.On the one hand,we should_________.On the other hand,we should_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Failure is the Mother of Success.You should write at Ieast 100words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.失败是不可避免的。

2.为什么说失败是成功之母。

3.我的观点。

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Failure is the Mother of Success

In the long life span,we will definitely experience a wealth of setbacks.Its more than a possibility.It’s an inevitability.A great variety of highly uncertain failures and difficulties will be on our life path.

However,failure breeds success.On the one hand,success doesn‘t mean the absence of failures;it means the attainment of ultimate objectives.It means winning the war,not every battle.On the other hand,we can draw Iessons and profits from failure.The season of failure is the best time for sowing the seeds of success.

When the unanticipated frustration comes,we must summon up all our courage to conquer it.Furthermore,we can gain from failures.We can steer ourselves through failures and embark on the road to success.