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Such changes have a significant impact on both individuals and the whole society.For one thing,with the deepening of the housing reform,private housing investment witnesses an unprecedented boom.For another,national urban construction undergoes sustainable development,which is of great importance to the national economy as a whole.In a word,the housing reform is beneficial to both individuals and the whole society.

妙语评析:这是一篇混合型图表类文章,既有解释原因又有后果影响。范文首段描述从1990年至2000年住户产权的变化。第二段给出两点理由,首先,住房改革导致这种变化。其次,人们收入水平提高,想要更好的居住环境。第三段从个人和国家两个方面描述后果,最后一句话是对全文做了总结,结构非常工整。文中用黑体标出的句子运用得很巧妙,为文章增加了闪光点。

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1.Two reasons,in my mind,can account for the fundamental changes_______.

2.Such changes have a significant impact on_______.

3.In a word,_______is beneficial to_______.

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From the chart,we can see clearly that_______declined abruptly from_______to_______and then to_______,while_______rose from______to_______and then to_______during the same period.

Two reasons,in my mind,can account for the fundamental changes_______.On the one hand,_______.On the other hand,_______.

Such changes have a significant impact on_______.For one thing,_______.For another,_______.In a word,_______is beneficial to_______.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic:Why College Students Take Part-time Jobs?You should write at Ieast 150words,and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:

1.最近几年越来越多的大学生兼职;

2.分析大学生兼职的原因;

3.分析大学生兼职的意义。

范文欣赏

Why College Students Take Part-time Jobs?

According to a recent survey,about 56percent of Chinese college students held a part-time job in 2004,compared with nearly zero in 1994,and this figure may increase to 60percent this year.College students can work as tutors,salespersons,and engineers.They are doing whatever work they can find at their Ieisure time.

Why do they want part-time jobs?I think there are some reasons.Firstly,they feel the financial pressure because books,movies and bus fares have all gone up in price.There is scarcely a young boy or girl who does not want to earn a Iittle money to help cover the increasingly higher college costs,and at best save enough to go travelling or buy things they have Iong desired.In this way they hope to be financially independent and avoid the indignity of having to ask for money from parents again and again.Secondly,they want to gain some experience in society.Students growing up from nursery school to college only know about books and have trouble dealing with realities.Thirdly,working on a part-time basis can provide them with a rare opportunity to know the outside world and prepare them for the future career.

The significance of college students doing a part-time job means more than money and experience.It will broaden their outlook and exert a profound influence on their personalities and Iives.

妙语评析:这是一篇混合型图表类文章,既有解释原因又有意义影响。依据提纲文章分为了三个部分。首先根据图表数据指出最近几年越来越多的大学生兼职这一现象。优秀范文。文中用黑体标出的句子是各段落的主题句,也是文章主体句。

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1.According to a recent survey,_______.

2.They are doing whatever_______.

3.The significance of_______means more than_______.

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According to a recent survey,_______.College students can work as_______.They are doing whatever_______.

Why do they want_______?I think there are some reasons.Firstly,_______.Secondly,_______.Thirdly,_______.

The significance of_______means more than_______.It will_______.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic:Educational Enrollment in China.You should write at Ieast 150words,and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:

Educational Enrollment in China of 1980and 2003

1.根据上面的图表描述1980年和2003年入学人数上的变化情况。

2.分析产生这些变化的原因。

3.我对这一现象的观点和看法。

范文欣赏

Educational Enrollment in China

From 1980to 2003,educational enrollment in China has greatly changed.According to the Form,the number of primary school and secondary school students has decreased.But the number of the students who enroll in specialized schools,universities and colleges has increased respectively from 0.987to 1.43million and from 0.951to 1.311million.

What has influenced the educational enrollment?In my opinion,there are several reasons.First,the changes show that people pay more and more attention to education.They have realized that education is important to the development of the society.Second,the Iife standard has improved.Thus,they have more money to provide their children with higher education.Third,there are fewer chances for jobs.In order to find better jobs,more and more students want to become more competitive by getting higher education.

With the development of the society and the improvement of Iife standard,there will be increasing number of young people entering school to receive higher education.

妙语评析:这是一篇混合型图表类文章,既有原因解释又有个人观点表达。文章中心明确,内容完整,语言流畅,连贯性较强。文中用黑体标出的句子是图表类文章写作中常用句式。

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1.According to the form,_______.

2.In my opinion,there are several reasons.

3.With the______,there will be_______.

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From_______,_______has greatly changed.According to the form,_______.

What has influenced the_______?In my opinion,there are several reasons.First,_______.Second,_______.Third,_______.

With the______,there will be_______.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Personalized Services.You should write at Ieast 150words,and base your composition on the chart and the outline given below:

1.个性化服务在大中城市愈来愈普及(个性化服务:通过互联网,顾客把求购商品的信息,如大小、颜色、样式等通过网络发送给生产厂家,由生产厂家根据顾客要求生产出产品,然后通过邮局邮寄给顾客。)

2.解释其原因。

3.你对个性化服务发展趋势的看法。