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第43章 模板作文赏析(27)

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Personalized Services

Form the chart,we learn that nowadays more and more people order goods through Internet,which has aroused common concern.What impresses us most is some people even e-mail the factory owners for the specifications of the goods they want and ask them to produce the products according to their requirements.There are many reasons accounting for this phenomenon.

First of all,the conception of individuality plays an important part.When serviced,more and more people attach vital importance to their personal preferences,their Iikes and dislikes.What is more,personalized services based on Internet is convenient and rapid.For example,consumers can choose and order commodities by clicking their mouse at home.In addition,as a new business,it caters for the fashion,and therefore attracts a large number of young people.

As far as I am concerned,the personalized service is one of promising businesses.For one thing,the ever developing science and technology will cut down the cost of e-service and thus make it more affordable for a wider range of consumers.For another,the comvenience of e-commerce and the popularity of individuality will attract more people to choose personalized services via Internet.In brief,this new approach will eventually play an important role in our future Iife.

妙语评析:这是一篇混合型图表类文章,既有解释原因又有趋势预测。首先指出现在上网买东西的人越来越多,而且个性化的服务也越来越多。第一段的最后一句是一个过渡句,引出了第二段的原因解释。第二段从三个方面对这一现象进行了原因分析。最后一段给出了自己对个性化服务发展趋势的看法,分了两点来阐述,条理很清楚。文中用黑体标出的句子是文章主题句,也是骨干句。

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1.What impresses us most is_______.

2.There are many reasons accounting for_______.

3.As far as I am comcerned,_______.

4.In brief,_______.

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Form the chart,we Iearn that nowadays_______,which has aroused common concern.What impresses us most is_______.There are many reasons accounting for_______.

First of all,_________.What is more,_________.For example,_________.In addition,_______.

As far as I am comcerned,_________.For one thing,_________.For another,_________.In brief,_______.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic:The Average Worker Expense in City A.You should write at Ieast 150words,and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:

The Average Worker Expense in City A

1.根据上图描述该市一般居民家庭支出的变化;

2.分析产生这些变化的原因;

3.你的结论。

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The Average Worker Expense in City A

The table shows us the changes of the average worker expense from 1999to 2004.There are six components of a worker‘s expense.According to the table,the total income has increased during that period of time with nearly 50percent.With the increase of income,the percentage of components of a worker’s expense has varied accordingly.

First,workers spend Iess money on food.What‘s more,expense on fuel in 2004decreased to half that of 1999.On the contrary,workers spend more money on housing and articles for daily use while spending on clothing remained unchanged.In addition,expense on culture and service increased a Iittle with the percentage from 2%to 3%.

What does this change indicate?With the Iiving standards improved rapidly,workers require more comfortable and better Iives.They could afford to buy houses,spend more on daily use articles and pay more attention to spiritual Iives.

However,the money spent on culture and entertainment is rather small compared with that of articles for daily use.Though workers begin to realize the importance of their spiritual lives,expense on it is far from enough.We believe,with the increasing income of workers,expense on culture and entertainment would rise.

妙语评析:这是一篇混合型图表类文章,既有原因解释又有个人观点的表达。值得学习的模板作文。文中用黑体标出的句子运用很巧妙,为文章增加了生机。

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1.The table shows us_______.

2.According to the table,_______.

3.On the contrary,_______.

4.In addition,_______.

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The table shows us_______.There are_______.According to the table,_______.

First,_______.What’s more,_______.On the contrary,_______.In addition,_______.

What does this change indicate?With_______,workers requir_______.They could_______.

However,_______.Though_______.We believe,_______.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic:The number of scientific breakthroughs over the past years in China(Estimated).You should write at Ieast 150words,and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:

1.根据下图描述2001至2004年的变化情况。

2.解释产生这些变化的原因。

3.发展趋势预测。

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The number of scientific breakthroughs over the past years in China

As is apparently betrayed in the chart above,the number of scientific breakthroughs over the past years in China has been climbing and rocketed to 204cases in the year of 2004,with an average increase rate of 83%on yearly basis.

The foremost reasons for the tremendous performance can be illustrated as follows.To begin with,idea that science and technology are also productivity has contributed to the increase of scientific breakthrough.People come to realize that if we want to survive and develop in current world,we must keep pace with the development of science and technology.What’s more,the Reform and Opening has also brought about the increase of scientific breakthroughs.The Reform and Opening has accelerated the development of China’s economy,which has Iaid a solid foundation for the increase of scientific breakthroughs.

To sum up,as our country develops at a high speed,it is predicable that more scientific breakthroughs will come into our life in the coming future.

妙语评析:这是一篇混合型图表类文章,既有解释原因又有趋势预测。根据提纲要求,首先描述了过去几年中中国科技成果的突飞猛进。文章中心明确,紧扣主题,语言简洁,用词准确,连贯性很强,能给人留下深刻的印象。文中用黑体标出的句子是文章的主体句,也是骨干句。

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1.As is apparently betrayed in the chart above,_______.

2.To begin with,_______.

3.To sum up,_______,it is predicable that_______.

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As is apparently betrayed in the chart above,_______.

The foremost reasons for the tremendous performance can be illustrated as follows.To begin with,_______.What‘s more,_______.

To sum up,_______,it is predicable that_______.