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第18章 模板作文赏析(2)

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During the_________period in_________,the year of_________,one of_________,was struck down by_________.

The news_________.At first,_________.However,through_________,we gradually_________help him.Some teachers_________while some students_________.With our care and concern,_________.

Such an incident teaches us_________.Our society is full of_________.Just Iike a famous song goes,“_________.”And I do believe that_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest.You should write at Ieast 120words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1.当前社会上存在着许多不诚实的现象。

2.诚实利人利己,做人应该诚实。

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It Pays to Be Honest

As is known to all,“It pays to be honest”.It is usually better to be honest than dishonest.Sometimes honesty may get you in trouble or hurt someone,but on the whole telling the truth is better than Iying.

However,there are many dishonest instances in our society.In the first place,many merchants cheat the customers.Take my neighbor,Xiao Wang,as an example.He bought a TV set with 2,000yuan a week ago,but now it doesn‘t work.In the second place,some students cheat on exams in order to pass the exams or get high marks.Last but not the Ieast important,many rich professionals cheat the government by evading the taxes.

On the contrary,honesty not only brings us honor and friendship,but also material gains.To begin with,if we are honest,we will be trusted by others so others’trust will give us self-respect as well as social companionship.In addition,other people‘s trust will also bring us instrumental support—financial aid,material resources,and needed services.So to sum up,it does pay to be honest.

(2002.12CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇记叙文。虽然提纲给出了两个提示,但是写成三段是比较符合要求的。第一段为介绍主题;第二段列举出了一些社会上不诚实的现象,用了表示顺序的连接词(In the first place……,In the second place……)。第三段写了诚实如何对自己和他人有好处,为什么做人应该诚实。最后还下一个简短的结论。文中用黑体标出的句子起到了点睛的作用,也是记叙文中较好的句型模板。

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1.As is known to all,“_________”.

2.Sometimes_________,but on the whole_________.

3.Last but not the Ieast important,_________.

4.So to sum up,_________.

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As is known to all,“_________”.It is usually better_________than_________.Sometimes_________,but on the whole_________.

However,there are_________.In the first place,_________.In the second place,_________.Last but not the Ieast important,_________.

On the contrary,_________not only_________,but also_________.To begin with,_________.In addition,_________.So to sum up,_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic John’s First Job Interview.You should write at Ieast 120words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1.面试前的准备

2.面试时的情况

3.面试后的感受及吸取的经验

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John‘s First Job Interview

John had wanted to be a teacher ever since he was a Iittle kid.After graduating college,he managed to arrange an interview with the principal of a school in his hometown.The night before the interview John prepared rigorously.He created a Iist of questions that the principal might ask him and worked out some pretty good answers.He imagined the situation and practiced answering over and over.

John Ieft for the inerview first thing in the morning,anticipating every move the principal might make.He got to the principals office and exchanged the usual greetings calmly enough.He sat down across from the principal.The principal began to ask questions and suddenly fear kicked in.Even the simplest of questions left him stuttering and stammering.

Later,John realized that he had simple prepared for the interview in the wrong way.He planned the interview too fixedly and got so anxious about it that when it occurred he couldn’t act in a natural manner.John Iearned that he shouldn‘t concentrate so much on what might be asked,because any unexpected question could trip him up.He should concentrate more on why deep down he wants to be a teacher.This will help him to give a true and natural answer every time.

妙语评析:这是一篇混合型记叙文,既叙述了整个事件又谈及了感受。文章对面试后的感受的描写比较多,突出了整件事情带给John的深远影响。文中用黑体标出的句子在此文章中运用比较好,给文章增加了亮点。

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1.After graduating college,_________.

2.Even the simplest of questions_________.

3.Later,_________realized that_________.

4.This will help him to_________.

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_________wanted to be a_________.After graduating college,_________.The night before the interview_________.

_________in the morning,anticipating_________.The principal began to_________.Even the simplest of questions_________.

Later,_________realized that_________._________Iearned that_________.He should_________.This will help him to_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the title Immoral Behavior in Public according to the following outline given in Chinese.Your composition should be no fewer than 120words.

1.我们经常在公共场合见到各种不道德的行为,叙述你的一次相关经历。

2.这些不文明的行为会有哪些影响。

3.我们应该怎样改善这种现象。

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Immoral Behavior in Public

To witness immoral behavior in public,one need only visit the Beijing subway.I still remember the first time I took the Beijing subway.It was an early morning.I was in a hurry to go to school.When I was trying to get a ticket,I found a Iot of people waiting in front of me,but nobody was in the line.

Immoral behaviors in public exert a series of problems.One of the most serious ones is that it may exert a negative impact on our sense of social responsibility.We will keep ignoring other people’s rights and feelings,and in turn,we too will be disrespected some day.