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第19章 模板作文赏析(3)

The improvement of this phenomenon is certainly not easy.With an eye on practical implementation and cost effectiveness,I propose that society make it clear in every way that people who fail to respect the common good will be seriously punished.Stricter policies for this should be made to correct this phenomenon as soon as possible.

妙语评析:这是一篇混合型记叙文,既叙述了事件又陈述了如何解决问题。文章根据提纲要求写了三段。文章紧扣主题,表达思想清楚。文中用黑体标出的句子是记叙文常用句式,也是文章的主题句。

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1.To witness_________,one need_________.

2.It was an early morning_________.

3.One of the most serious ones is that_________.

4.We will_________,and in turn,_________.

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To witness_________,one need_________.I still remember the first time_________.It was an early morning_________.

_________exert a series of problems.One of the most serious ones is that_________.We will_________,and in turn,_________.

The improvement of this phenomenon is_________.With_________,I propose that_________.Stricter policies for_________as soon as possible.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic A Quarrel with My Roommate.You should write at Ieast 120words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1.与同宿舍的一个同学吵架及起因。

2.你们吵架的过程。

3.你如何解决及从中吸取的教训。

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A Quarrel with My Roommate

The other week I had a bitter quarrel with one of my roommates.Six of us Iive in small room about eight square meters,desperate for more space.

Weeks ago,one of my roommates brought in a very Iarge suitcase and placed it under her bed,but days Iater she found something wrong with her suitcase.As we Iive on the ground floor,her case soon got wet.She took it out and,after drying it up,she just put it on her desk because she had no other choices.I happened to be opposite her desk and her suitcase was so Iarge that it not only occupied the whole of her desk but half of mine as well.I was very much annoyed,so I angrily pushed it forward without first talking to her about it.I pushed a bit too hard and the case fell off her desk,messing up everything it contained.On seeing this,she flew into a temper and angrily shouted at me.The quarrel started and lasted about two hours.

When I calmed down days Iater,I thought over the quarrel and began to see something.I should have talked to her about it first and then worked with her to find a solution to the problem.Living in a room with limited space,we should learn to get on well with one another.

妙语评析:这是一篇混合型记叙文,叙述了事件、解决办法及感受。文章把吵架过程描述的丰富生动,给人留下深刻印象。文中用黑体标出的句子突出了文章的主题,又是记叙文中常用句式模板。

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1.Weeks ago,_________,but days Iater_________.

2.On seeing this,_________.

3.I should_________and then_________.

4._________,we should Iearn to_________.

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The other week I had_________._________,desperate for_________.

Weeks ago,_________,but days Iater_________._________.On seeing this,_________._________started and Iasted about_________.

When I_________days Iater,I thought over_________and began to_________.

I should_________and then_________._________,we should Iearn to_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic:Fascinating China.You should write at Ieast 120words according to the situation given below in Chinese:

一位外国朋友第一次来中国,他想让你介绍两三样极具中国特色的事物(可以是风俗文化等),你会向他介绍什么?

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Fascinating China

China,one of the cradles of human civilization,possesses so many treasures with Chinese characteristics that numerous foreign friends come to visit her.

The first place to go to is,the Great Wall,which is the symbol of China and one of the eight wonders in the world.What‘s more,it is said to be the only construction that can be seen from the outer space.In the imperial periods,it was used in defense of the nomadic people.Since Iiberation,it has become a place of interest.There is a famous saying:“He who does not reach the Great Wall isn’t a true man.”

China is the home of Panda,an animal with only two colors,white and black,but very cute.It‘s our national treasure,often served as a friendly diplomat.

Terracotta-clay warriors unearthed in Xi’an,a famous ancient city-were sculptured in Qin Dynasty,the first dynasty of China.When former U.S.President CIinton came to China,he visited terracotta‘s first.

The above mentioned are just a wave of the sea.If you want to know more about this ancient nation,welcome to ask me.

妙语评析:这是一篇记叙文。文章的描写很到位。最后一段是一个总结,点出了中国还有很多有特色的地方,欢迎大家来中国。文中用黑体标出的句子是每一段的点睛之笔,也是具有中国特色事物的主题。

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1.The first place to go to is,_________,which is the_________.

2.What’s more,it is said to be_________.

3.There is a famous saying:“_________.”

4.The above mentioned are_________.

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China,one of the_________,possesses so many treasures with Chinese characteristics that_________.

The first place to go to is,_________,which is the_________.What‘s more,it is said to be_________.There is a famous saying:“_________.”

China is the_________.It’s our national treasure,often served as_________._________.

The above mentioned are_________.If you want to know more about_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic My First Job.You should write at Ieast 120words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1.你的第一份工作是什么?

2.描述一些工作细节。

3.你的感受或收获。

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My First Job

Before I started at university,I took my first job as a waitress in a nice restaurant.